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  1. General Response:
    It certainly has the energy you need for the middle school age group. The origami forms are a nice touch and echo some of the recent game designs (and a recent iOS iMessage sticker pack). I think you’re on the right track.

    Design Critique:
    From the communication position, not sure if the tape cassette is coming back as a retro thing, but otherwise, I’m not sure it will connect with them. Likewise, double-check with your local middle schoolers to see if that hand gesture is still in vogue. The other thing that doesn’t quite jump out to me is contrast/legibility. It is somewhat difficult to pick the wording out from the background. If this is projected, it will be even harder to read.

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